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#0, The Lonesome Gods Posted by Les Down Under on 08-02-19 at 04:59 PM Leatherette Edition Editing / continuity. Page 248 second line after the break in text reads "Miss Nesselrode was crocheting when I entered" 6 paragraphs later without change of action it reads "Miss Nesselrode put down her pen, placed her palms flat..." Could be edited to read Miss Nesselrode put down her work or craftwork. Les Isn't making a smoking section in a restaurant like making a peeing section in a swimming pool?