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"Brionne"
 
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Editing issue on pages 47 to 50 in Leatherette version (end of Chapter 5)
section opens "At a back table in one of Corrine's nineteen saloons" The subsequent discussions and descriptions, to my mind, still have the group of Allards in Promontory. References to, going down to the stable where Brionne obtained the horses, Mowbury still in town, Worry that Brionne showed up in Promontory (not the area in general).

Page 53 4th Paragraph commencing Yes to fine the mine was her only chance. This has Miranda and the Bradys in Corrine when earlier they were in Promontory and only Brionne went back to Corrine to start his travels. It appears LL has unconsciously shifted everyone from Promontory to Corrine after Brionne's departure.
Les
I am not going to get technical but chemistry says that alcohol is a solution.


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