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Les Down Under
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"The Lonesome Gods"
 
   Leatherette Edition Editing / continuity.

Page 248
second line after the break in text reads "Miss Nesselrode was crocheting when I entered"
6 paragraphs later without change of action it reads "Miss Nesselrode put down her pen, placed her palms flat..."

Could be edited to read Miss Nesselrode put down her work or craftwork.

Les
Isn't making a smoking section in a restaurant like making a peeing section in a swimming pool?



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